Post by coopergal213 on Feb 7, 2009 13:17:45 GMT -5
Where am I?
Where is everyone?
My eyes open to see nothingness.
I feel like I'm in water.
Am I Floating?
I let out a breath and bubbles appear.
Bubbles?
If I'm in the water, how can i breathe?
I start to panic.
I squirm in the tight space where I'm confined.
I squirmed for hours. Finally exhausted , i give up. I let my heavy eye lids close and again nothingness.
............
I wake to see a black form in front of me. His hands pressed against the glass. He is holding the cane. I gasp. My head is filled with memories, i'm having a flashback.
......P.O.V CHANGE.........(Point of View)
LOno runs on the rooftops. She trips and falls. A shard of light is flashed on her back. A bullet is shot, it barely misses her shoulder.
LOno glances back and fox is chasing her.
*God d**n It, Luci. Lay Off!* ( *[sentence] * = Thought made by LOno or any of the Characters.)
LOno picks herself up and runs. She speeds up and leaps off the rooftop. She grabs a ladder and slips. "nuts!" yells LOno. Luckily, She catches herself and slides down the ladder.
.................................................
Luci Lopez yells in the air " CRAP CRAP CRAP, I'm so fired!!!"
She jumps off the rooftop and onto a balcony of The Fernadez's. She quietly climbs down the fire escape.
Just then, Zach pops his head out of the window. She freezes in mid-step when Zach notices her. *CRAP* Luci turns around to see Zach's love-struck expression. *Dang its the stalker!* "Oh My God! Luci, You do like me!" Zach yells.
*CRAP! CRAP! CRAP* Luci yells in her head.
"Luci we should totally go --"
She takes a running leap of the fire escape and cuts Zach off in mid sentence.
"Gotta go Peace" She sticks her tongue and shows the peace sign as she falls.
..............................
LOno slides down the ladder to the wet floor. She runs out into the street and looks around. *Where is everyone? Oh well.*
LOno runs into an alley. She looks up to see the Fernadez Household.
"Wow, Nice Place they go-"
CRASH!!
LOno is on the floor sprawled under something heavy. She looks ups to see the stunned Luci Lopez on top of her.
" GET OFF OF ME!!!!" yells LOno
"wh-what?" Luci asks.
"I said get off of me"
"ummm, m-kay" Luci gets off of LOno, not noticing thaT SHE was sitting on to of her criminal."
Suddenly a young teenage boy appears in front of both of the girls. They look up to see Bret Gonzalez. He is holding a golden cane.
" Hey Ladies" says Bret, leaning on his Cane.
Both girls fall. Bret catches LOno leaving Luci to fall on the floor.
" OW, HEY!" yelled Luci, "You let me fall"
Bret didn't hear her. He was already running away with LOno. She was laughing her head off. She ran into an alley and grabbed a skateboard. She jumped on hers and skated away leaving Bret standing there in awe.
Bret leaned onto his cane only to fall on his side. *WHERE WAS HIS CANE?*
LOno laughs as she skates down the road. She was holding Bret's cane. It was hers now.
Too Bad she didn't know that the cane brought something even worse than Luci landing on her, that was pretty bad.
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Hope you liked the first part to Midnight Eclipse, i haven't written in a while. First Part
YAY!!!!!!!
It might be awhile till i post a new one. This is my STORY NO ONE ELSES, not trying to be mean. i just wanted to right.
Where is everyone?
My eyes open to see nothingness.
I feel like I'm in water.
Am I Floating?
I let out a breath and bubbles appear.
Bubbles?
If I'm in the water, how can i breathe?
I start to panic.
I squirm in the tight space where I'm confined.
I squirmed for hours. Finally exhausted , i give up. I let my heavy eye lids close and again nothingness.
............
I wake to see a black form in front of me. His hands pressed against the glass. He is holding the cane. I gasp. My head is filled with memories, i'm having a flashback.
......P.O.V CHANGE.........(Point of View)
LOno runs on the rooftops. She trips and falls. A shard of light is flashed on her back. A bullet is shot, it barely misses her shoulder.
LOno glances back and fox is chasing her.
*God d**n It, Luci. Lay Off!* ( *[sentence] * = Thought made by LOno or any of the Characters.)
LOno picks herself up and runs. She speeds up and leaps off the rooftop. She grabs a ladder and slips. "nuts!" yells LOno. Luckily, She catches herself and slides down the ladder.
.................................................
Luci Lopez yells in the air " CRAP CRAP CRAP, I'm so fired!!!"
She jumps off the rooftop and onto a balcony of The Fernadez's. She quietly climbs down the fire escape.
Just then, Zach pops his head out of the window. She freezes in mid-step when Zach notices her. *CRAP* Luci turns around to see Zach's love-struck expression. *Dang its the stalker!* "Oh My God! Luci, You do like me!" Zach yells.
*CRAP! CRAP! CRAP* Luci yells in her head.
"Luci we should totally go --"
She takes a running leap of the fire escape and cuts Zach off in mid sentence.
"Gotta go Peace" She sticks her tongue and shows the peace sign as she falls.
..............................
LOno slides down the ladder to the wet floor. She runs out into the street and looks around. *Where is everyone? Oh well.*
LOno runs into an alley. She looks up to see the Fernadez Household.
"Wow, Nice Place they go-"
CRASH!!
LOno is on the floor sprawled under something heavy. She looks ups to see the stunned Luci Lopez on top of her.
" GET OFF OF ME!!!!" yells LOno
"wh-what?" Luci asks.
"I said get off of me"
"ummm, m-kay" Luci gets off of LOno, not noticing thaT SHE was sitting on to of her criminal."
Suddenly a young teenage boy appears in front of both of the girls. They look up to see Bret Gonzalez. He is holding a golden cane.
" Hey Ladies" says Bret, leaning on his Cane.
Both girls fall. Bret catches LOno leaving Luci to fall on the floor.
" OW, HEY!" yelled Luci, "You let me fall"
Bret didn't hear her. He was already running away with LOno. She was laughing her head off. She ran into an alley and grabbed a skateboard. She jumped on hers and skated away leaving Bret standing there in awe.
Bret leaned onto his cane only to fall on his side. *WHERE WAS HIS CANE?*
LOno laughs as she skates down the road. She was holding Bret's cane. It was hers now.
Too Bad she didn't know that the cane brought something even worse than Luci landing on her, that was pretty bad.
______________________________________________________________________
Hope you liked the first part to Midnight Eclipse, i haven't written in a while. First Part
YAY!!!!!!!
It might be awhile till i post a new one. This is my STORY NO ONE ELSES, not trying to be mean. i just wanted to right.