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Post by Zxel on Sept 20, 2007 19:49:58 GMT -5
Hey there! This story actually has a bit of an outline to it. Basically, Kara steals something she shouldn't have, and it possesses her. She proceeds to kidnap Sly Cooper's daughter, Phoebe.
Phoebe realises that something is wrong with Kara and is trying to help her while the Coopers band together to fight Kara and whatever force is controlling her.
(I just wanted to write some bad!Kara. I'll start the first post tomorrow - if I don't go to sleep soon, I'll pass out. Anyone feel free to steal first post from me, I don't mind. And you can expand the plot, that was just a summary.)
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Post by coopergal213 on Sept 21, 2007 21:42:02 GMT -5
Phobe thingy.I quickly woke up hereing a noise on my window screech my window went screech screehc!!!! boom boom boom teh window was trryrin to open whoosh the window was open a dark figure stood in teh window ah a spark of gold gleamed in the light of te moon Kara i sadi tiredly.The figure did not speak.The figure was moving it was amaking a rusling noise it quickly finds what it is looking for karai say bu tit was blurring picture my gallses weren't on i could barely see kara i kept saying i looked for my glassses i found on my dresser kara i whisper kara is hta you the figure gleamed it brown eyes.i found them i found my glasses i was about to shove them on when i noticed the figure comeing closer to me i paused for moment i slowly put on my glasse sand i soon as my glasses were fully on i saw one thingy and one thing only a sack whooshing over my head hey hey i call bu it was no use my room was sound proof i fell dragging the n i throw i was flying in the air boom i hit something then black out..............
um ah well steph tel but his you like and what happend to your ukm wellimmage it gone no image here
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Post by Zxel on Sept 26, 2007 21:23:17 GMT -5
(I can still see my icon. =/)
Kara locked Phoebe in one of the rooms of the abandoned building her cousin had once owned. The girl was unconcious inside, but Kara knew that as soon as she woke, she'd be making a racket.
Kara fought against it, but the force of the gem in her pocket propelled her downstairs and out the door again. The night air hit her face harshly. It was freezing.
She wasn't sure where the gem was taking her, but she hoped that someone in the Cooper household woke soon and discovered Phoebe's disappearance so that Sly or Carmelita or SOMEONE could help!
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Post by coopergal213 on Sept 28, 2007 21:26:53 GMT -5
kara walks outside it was hour later she does ot rmemeber what she did lat night ut she sure was tired Meanwhile in the cooper house hold.Phobe time for breakfast.Oh snap crakle pop.slic screams as he fall overs a baseball onto the bed.slic wearlily walks to phobe room yo laptop time for morning chow.oh my god dad dad dad slic cries like a little baby.how come phobe's room is sound proof oh god chiill out slic says sly.the more he is w/ murray the ore he resmbles him sly tohught.finally slci walks into th phobe's room laptop up & adom time for chow.Roselina!!!! slic screams.oh god slic thinks bad dision the women in the housea re in the bathrom at this time he was dead.What scream roselina waht do you want!Phobe not here slic screams he quickly runs to his room don't kill me.the twins burst into the room what up my raccooons the wtins quickly notice roselinand back away slowing to late she burst inot he tear my ltittlw dister is gone phobe is gone phob is gone.stomp stomp the y heard oh no they sadi sly quickly jump inth eroom clar out she is comeing boom boom boom.Smash the montrous creature burst in the room fuming what do you want!!!!!!!!!!!!!carmeliat screams wiht all her might grumpy becasue her beauty sleee was disturbed
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Post by Zxel on Sept 29, 2007 14:11:47 GMT -5
"You're sure you haven't seen her?" Penelope asked, nibbling on a bit of toast.
"Positive!" Carmelita cried. "What should we do?"
Penelope took another bite. "This is certainly odd."
"What is? How are you being so calm!?"
"The situation is odd. Kara's missing, too." Penelope explained.
Well, Carmelita thought, that explains Murray freaking out the next room over. She'd just assumed that he was closer to Phoebe than she had thought.
"Any thoughts, Penelope?" Carmelita asked finally.
Penelope grinned. "Always."
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Post by coopergal213 on Sept 30, 2007 11:58:12 GMT -5
OMG OMG omg she gone kara is gone sh gone missing kara no no no screams murray boom.whoosh sly burst intot eh room murray had fainted.Carm i need soem help the murray has fainted carmelita walked over cofee in her hand penelope followed.Penelope looked excited.sly looked at her like um penelope.oh sorry sly well i jsut invented a new rc attachment. ah sly said .penelope ran away to get her rc car and the attachment.she borth it back.she attaches the attchment .sly jaw opensd it was giant crane penelope pickied up murraya ndput him on the livijg room couch wah wah murray babble kara's gone murray faintd onece again dang murray asaid sly you big lug
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Post by Zxel on Oct 3, 2007 19:23:35 GMT -5
"Anyway..." Penelope said, ignoring Murray's incessant muttering. "The last time I saw Kara, she was heading out to steal a gem for a client. He said it had been stolen long ago from his family and that he wanted it back. Kara figured it was a good cause."
"I suppose." Said Carmelita, who didn't entirely approve of theft, no matter the justification.
"She set out about two nights ago, and we haven't seen her since."
From where he lay, Murray let out a pitiful groan. "I mi-i-i-i-iss her."
"Shh, it's okay, Big Guy." Sly comforted, patting his hippo friend on the shoulder.
Penelope continued. "So, what we need to do is to research this gem, and recon the area around the gem's former location in search for clues to where Kara could have gone."
"What about Phoebe?" Carmelita asked.
"I have a sneaking suspicion," Penelope said, frowning, "That if we find Kara, we'll find your daughter, too."
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Post by coopergal213 on Oct 6, 2007 11:55:05 GMT -5
Kara walked unwilling walked into the warehouse.Umm ummmmmm!! cried the wraped up
prisoner.AW shut up phobe Kara screamed.AH kara screamed in her head she could not help herself she had no control over her body. She thinks to herself when did this happen when did it start? She rember she was at the ruins of clockwerk when she looked for the gem that her client wanted. the gems were in th lava untouched she did not want to jump in there she was pushed and that was the last she remebered. Kara turned around walked over to a room and open the door in the rooom was a tiger. Good job said the tiger.the tiger walked into the moonlight.You did well by stealing the raccooon's and the stupid fox's daughter.For months i listend to that blubbering fox. months that felt like centuries.And the raccoon that ladies man self proclaimed who loved the fox why i do not know but now they are together.and you have stolen the the child now the prohecy willl be in act. Hahaha lauhged the tiger.I will see you in 1 hour bring the the rest of the children.and take this one with you. a teenage figure came out of the shadows.It was a raccoon.It looked like sly.but instead over bacl stripes she had blonde stripes.whoa.Kara walked out of the rooom wiht the girl.what is your nae she asked the raccoon.My name is Elizeth call me liz she winked.What a charm tought kara.The itger jumped in fron of the pair i have one more thing.Neyla handed liz a cane like slys but it was more girl is had flowers on it liz pushed a button on it and the flower turned into blades whoa thoguth kara.NEyla walke over to kara.kara you will go to the cooper house and drop her off there and leave like a ding dong ditch.KAra walked and ran wiht liz by here sid eliz sped ahead fast kara thoguhgt.agaist here will kara droped lizzy off she wanted t go in side but she hid on the roof.She watched intreged Hi nsaid lizzy has sly answered slic was behindf him he was saying hi trying to impress her haha lauhged kara just like his father.she tunred to run away but as kara turned a pair of familar greeen eyes stared at her.crap roslins kara thoguht.WHoosh kara was on the floor and in a sack
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Post by Zxel on Oct 16, 2007 18:28:30 GMT -5
"What the heck are you doing here?" Roselina hissed, when Kara was finally released from the sack. As far as she could tell, they were in the foxcoon's basement.
Kara wanted to say that something was wrong, and to warn Roselina not to let Neyla see her home through Kara's eyes, but Neyla spoke through her, drowning out what she really wanted to say, "None of your buisiness. Now, if you know what's good for you, little Cooper girl, you'll come with me quietly."
Roselina smirked. "I don't know what's gotten into you, but you're in no position to be threatening me."
The younger girl rose to her feet, pointing her weapon at Kara's throat.
"I dunno why you're doing this," Roselina said, "but you're stopping right here and now."
"Little idiot." Kara hissed, but on the inside she was congratulating Roselina on her courage and wit. She hadn't even seen her weapon coming until it was at her neck.
Suddenly, there was a clatter upstairs that startled them both, then the rushing of feet and a loud thud! as the door burst open. It was Murray, looking rather upset.
"Kara! I knew I heard you!" He yelled, and before Roselina managed to warn him, he had thrown himself onto Kara. "I was so worried!"
The urge to use her magic on him rose within her. Neyla was commanding her to attack.... But she couldn't! Kara flinched, trying to supress Neyla's influence. Neyla fought back, doubling her force. But this was Murray! She couldn't... she wouldn't!
Abruptly, the control over her weakened, fluttered, and broke away. Giving a squeal of joy, she flung her arms around Murray.
"Okay, ew." Said Roselina.
Kara smiled at her from over Murray's shoulder and hurriedly began to explain what had been going on.
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Post by coopergal213 on Oct 17, 2007 20:12:04 GMT -5
Whoa wait what everyone yelle din the seacret club house in australia(guru's cave in sly 3 they took secret super fast underground tunnels) So your sayin that u just broke free from some werido gem/control rremote type thingyu magiger(ma-Gi-ger like tiger)Yes replied kara she was looking around the room for Liz .liz was in the corner staring lovingly(like oh god sexy man)at slic.Slic was skater uniform A shirt that said you like?and nice jeans wiht some skater shoes(i am sorry but i fall for the skaters).Slic could noow read minds.He knew she liked him but oine thing he didn't know was that she could mind read too.Liz read slics mind he liked her she liked him.Slic decided to go to his room slic walked to the tunnel he got to te mid point like pit stop full frigde, and bathroom and monitor calling mom said slic carmlita face popped uphi mommie said slic going home see ya there okay honey carmelita answer see ya.Slic sat down on the couch to drink some soda still at the pit stop.he falls asleep.he wakes up to see liz sleep rihgt next 2 him what the said slic . she snuggle to get more comfortible .What ever slic thought.i smirk came on liz's face slic saw he decided rto do something random.Slic bent over liz and he well he ksed her right on the lips iz jolted awake but she did not back away she was fine she moved so she could kiss better she sat up and slic slid next 2 her they decides=ed to ge the scooter from the pit stop's closet.The rode through the tunnel till they hit the dorr to slic's room.,he walke din there wiht liz they sat and talk.mean while neyla sat dazzed in her chair tied up.Sly cooper walked around her so you thought you could beatt em said sly neyla nodded sly grinned well i beat you and your goingot the stay likke this sly put a blindfold on neyla's eyes he put her in a closet in the warehouse he walked outside pleased w/ himself but her couldn't stand it he loved neyal sly walked back inot the warehosue he grabed up neyla and put her in his secret comparment in the truck.he drove off to the motel(nothing gross gunna happen)he parked and took neyla to room213 he put her in there he removed her mouth cover mmm mumbled neyla.she coughed what do you want said neyla nothing said sly.he wasn't going to be mena or anything.He saw somethingin neylas pocket he removed it what a prety diomand sadi sly whoohs he felt controlled he lenaed in and reovd neylas eye hanckerchief then he lean down and kisse her like he never kissed someone before.why was he kssing her he loved neyla but not now he didn't want to kiss her he fought an dfought he pried himself away he pick up nyla threw her in the sack he threw her in a trunk an dhe threw that truck intot eh the trunk of the truck.he drove t the dokc(this is going ot get grusome but it has to end now sly thought.he drove to the dock and stopped he picked up the trukc he put on the end of the dokche opend it her un blind folded neyla he kissed he once and hugged her Neyla? sly asked yes he said weakly sly picked her up and carrie dher tot eh truck he put her in teh front he felt bad for her neyla he said agian wll u become good? or stay bad it is matter of life and death will you come and help us?YEs neyla replied weakley she leaned agaist sly he picked her up form the truck and ptu her in the truck back 4 a moment he quickly ran over tot eh docka nd threw the trunck over he walked back over to teh truck he picked up neyla and put her in the passenger seat she leaned agais him while he drove home.Knock knock... sly knowcked ont eh dorr neyla in his arms asleeep and wounded but not form him this happend before sly even found neyla
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Post by Zxel on Oct 18, 2007 10:50:07 GMT -5
"Did she put up a fight or something?" Kara asked when Sly returned, a bleeding Neyla in his arms.
"No, someone else did this," Sly said grimly, "but I don't know who... somehow, I don't think she's the only one behind this. In fact, she may not have even wanted to cooperate."
Kara tried to shrug, but Murray's heavy arms were still around her shoulders, so that proved a bit difficult. "I'm just glad I didn't hurt either of the girls."
"Speak for yourself." Phoebe interjected, nursing a bruise forming on her forearm. Kara gave an apologetic grin.
Sly lay Neyla down on the couch and stared at her, thinking.
"We'll have to ask her what happened once she wakes up."
Murray frowned. "Do you think that's safe?"
"Oh yeah." Sly said with a smirk. "She's on our side, now."
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Post by coopergal213 on Oct 20, 2007 15:57:18 GMT -5
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Post by coopergal213 on Oct 21, 2007 11:19:52 GMT -5
NEyla thingy.I wen ton after the auntie.i quickly asked the woman where my nephew was she said to come to the area in wihc h she had pointde out before good bye hahaha the woman screech wiht lauhgter. I neyl afollow the instuctions i walked and walked then i walk ed into this werehouse where i saw dummy it had a recoreding going auntie it soundsed like akme but then it wen ton going haha neyla your nephew is fined we tricked to sayy that the nrecored it then there was a black out.i awoke to see a spder and a alligater.one on ha d a haitian acent teh other was the woman from the phone call.i looked up to see their faces contessa i scream what do you want and mz ruby what do you wan let me go let me go let me go.i don't think so child sayd the contessa.WE need you tiger for the job to tak edown the fool who put us in jail.Sly cooper yelled mz ruby.hahahahthey screkied w/ laughter.i thouhgt i would go sane but they told em to us ethis stone to controllone other crew mate who i would regroot from the dear cooper gang.so i tricked kara then after i did that i did ot wan to do it any moreso they sent ot this area to gve the gem to there other client the i waqs beat up by a tiger i looked to notice when i was fihgt or bein beathen i had a sac on my headthen when teh tiger was not look ing i puled it off and i saw that the tiger was my own father rajann!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by coopergal213 on Oct 21, 2007 11:34:36 GMT -5
Rosleina thingy. I noticed neyla telling her story i was okay w/ that my father was not stupid afterall he was the greatest theif of all time.i quickly noticed tat slu and liz were no wherer to be seeen.i glared my beautiful green eyes at neyla she shuddered sly looked at me i gave a incent smile i could not help it i was just like my mother.that as one reason why my fathe rcould not hate me.I walke over to the stari case that led up to room i walked up to the roof and sat down i heard voices i lookd to see slic's window open.i jumped to his balcony i was so quiet haha that was one thing i got from my daddy.i looked to see slic and liz.just like dad i thouhgt.slic was lie in love wiht liz as i saw sli cleaning in to kiss liz she did the same just then liz moved arm she grabed a cane slics no it had flowers on it she quickly clikced a button and te flowers turned into blades she held high above slics head slic was ot paying attention no ii screamed in my head.Sliced heard rosleina's cried from his head he quickly opened his eyes to see the blades his eyes were illed with rage and sadness it seemed like he was wounded.......................NO cried liz i do nto wan to harm slic i don't wan to sh ewas doing the sam kara she had to break free
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Post by coopergal213 on Oct 21, 2007 17:42:54 GMT -5
WhOo ThIs Is tHe fiRsT LiZ nArRaTiNg tHiNg) NO i must fihgt it i must i will not hurt slic i must do what kara did but i am only a child she was an adult i am only a weak child what wait i am gaining control.whoosh i was pullled into a vortex in my mind there i saw rosleina dn slic fihgting w/ me they can mind read too i am not alone i can i mean we can fight it!no i need t drop the cane drop the cane si need to drop it whoosh clang did i drop it nope slic has it and roselina got me agaist the wal and weel ,mr.cooper is loooking at me intely at least i broke free.I am being taken o a room what teh and strandeldd into a chir but no-one is ther only rosleina oh grea i thought yeah thinks backk rosleina oyu rin for a big one
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